I have such an Overwhelming heaviness in my chest
I can feel it literally sitting on me
My eyes are full of tears
That I do not want to let fall
I cry alone
When no one is watching me
I cried really hard
It has been a while since I cried
That much
That hard
That long
I needed to unswallow this hard stone
That has lodged itself down my throat
Now into my chest till my stomach hurts
I don’t want to be without you my baby
They say it gets better
All lies
When will this darkness end
I have no faith anymore
Faith in myself
Faith in my life
Faith in God
Where does that leave me
I am only left speaking to an empty womb
I want to move forward
Yet pain of loosing you is stuck inside my being
This womb that held you within me
Now cries that you left too soon
How do I heal it
When I have no strength to even be angry
Emptiness
Emptiness
Emptiness
I can hear it echo in my entire body, soul, heart
Where does that leave me
If this resonated with you, you are not alone. Grief can feel isolating, but your story matters. If you feel comfortable, I invite you to share your journey, whether through a few words, a poem, or a personal experience. Your voice could be the comfort someone else is searching for. Leave a comment below, or,
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This poem is about the profound grief and emptiness that follows the loss of a baby. It captures the raw emotional reality of mourning a child who was once carried, loved, and imagined as part of the future.
The poem portrays grief not as a distant sadness but as a physical presence, a heaviness in the chest, a stone lodged in the throat, and an ache that spreads throughout the entire body.
It expresses the loneliness of carrying such pain in private, crying when no one is watching and struggling to find relief from sorrow that feels all-consuming.
The poem also explores the crisis of faith and identity that can accompany devastating loss. The repeated questioning of faith, in oneself, in life, and in God, reveals a deep struggle to understand how such a painful event could happen.
Promises that “it gets better” feel hollow against the reality of the grief being experienced. The loss has created a sense of disconnection from everything that once provided comfort, leaving behind uncertainty, doubt, and a feeling of being emotionally stranded.
The poem reflects the difficult reality that grief can shake the foundations of a person’s beliefs and understanding of the world.
At its heart, the poem is a conversation with absence. The image of “speaking to an empty womb” symbolizes the longing for a child who is no longer there and the struggle to reconcile the body’s memory of carrying life with the reality of loss.
The womb becomes both a reminder of love and a source of heartbreak. The repeated word “Emptiness” echoes throughout the poem, emphasizing how grief can leave a void that seems to touch every part of existence.
The closing question, “Where does that leave me?” captures the central theme of the poem, searching for meaning, direction, and the possibility of healing after a loss that has changed everything.
Power in these saddened words.
Grief is a powerful thing that can either break you or make you stronger. Thanks for visiting😄
Your welcome.
I’m super interested in your site but have to start work now! I’m following and will be back for sure.
Wow! Thank you so much! You are welcome anytime, again and again 😄
Thank you for dropping by. Its my personal pain.
heartbreaking … but your writing is wonderful :)
Thank you Jim, your compliment means a lot. Welcome again😄
Wow, so touching and heartfelt. Stay strong.
Thanks for sharing 💕
Thank you I’m touched. Taking it day by day
That’s the perfect way, one day at a time. Some days you’ll get by and others will be tough, but just remember continue to be strong
Prayers for comfort and healing….no matter how long or how many words it takes.
Thank you so much Elouise, sometimes you have words that you cannot explain to someone bt when you write it makes more sense. And then Prayers are what you need the most
Yes. Writing it makes it real and strangely comforting in a way that brings healing. Not just once and done, but many times over. 🙏🏻
Love your poetry. I am going to follow you. Keep in touch
Thank you Yassy. You’re welcome and I will keep in touch 😊
So happy to hear that.
If this resonated with you, you are not alone. Grief can feel isolating, but your story matters. If you feel comfortable, I invite you to share your journey, whether through a few words, a poem, or a personal experience. Your voice could be the comfort someone else is searching for. Leave a comment below, or,
You can share your stories through griefpoetry@gmail.com